Dialogue Only
Rose
Why do you have to ruin it for us, we move to a nice town with nice people and when we finally settle in you go and ruin it, every time!
Jack
I'm sorry
Rose
Is that all you can say "you're sorry" because it isn't good enough you've killed three people now and you make me put up with it, well I don't think I can anymore!
Jack
Don't leave me, I don't know what I'll do... You know what I'm capable of and being alone will make everything worse.
Rose
Well you told me you'd leave it, how can I even trust what you say anymore. We're constantly worried and running away from the trouble you've caused for us.
Jack
Look at me, nobody will find out I promise, it'll just be another missing persons report nobody will link him to us... I promise.
Rose
You can't make promises like that. There could be a fibre of anything on his body they are professionals!
Jack
Well they didn't find out about the other two so what's to say they'll find out about the third.
Rose
You talk about it as if you're proud of what you've done... I am disgusted in you! When we first started dating 4 years ago I was 15 and I never thought you'd be a cold hearted murderer!
Jack
Don't call me that, that is not who I am! You didn't have to talk to him, if you would of just stayed away from him this never would of happened.
Rose
You always do this, you can't blame your cold hearted murders on me... I can't talk to guys but you can talk to girls, it works different for you!
Jack
I am not cold hearted or a murderer!
Rose
You've killed three people Jack! When are you going to get that in to your stupid head.
Jack
Don't call me that, you're meant to love me!
Rose
How can I love a murderer.
Jack
Stop.
Rose
Else what
Jack
Stop playing on my fuse I don't want to hurt you again Rose please!
Rose
You should never of hurt me in the first place, you've ruined it for us. I am leaving you Jack, you can go down alone.
Jack
No Rose! You're going nowhere
Rose! Rose! Speak to me, please Rose! Wake up!
What have I done... I'm sorry.
Actions Only
Long shot of the living room Rose and Jack are in.
Mid shot as Rose sits down on the sofa.
Close up, side shot as Jack puts his head in his hands. Speaks in a muffled voice.
Mid shot, side shot as Rose stands up and points her hands towards Jack and raises her voice.
Long shot with slight panning as Jack stands up and slowly walks towards Rose, moving her hands out of the way.
Mid shot side shot as Rose pulls away from Jack and looks down in disappointment
Side close up as Jack holds Rose's face and raises it up
Long shot as Rose stares into Jack's eyes, moves Jacks hand away from her face and begins to walk away.
Mid shot as Rose turns back to face Jack furiously and waves her hands around in his face.
Mid shot to close up as Jack pushes Rose's hands down out of his face and begins to wave his in her face.
Long shot as Rose angrily walks towards Jack, and pushes him back.
Long shot as Jack pushes Rose back.
Mid shot as Rose shouts at Jack as his head begins to look towards the floor.
Close up as Jack moves his head slightly up and looks negatively at Rose.
Close up as Rose stares Jack in the eye.
Close up as Jack looks Rose in the eye.
Mid shot as Jack slowly took a slight step away from Rose.
Long shot as Rose takes one last look at Jack and angrily begins to walk away.
Long shot with the camera following Jack. Jack runs towards Rose and grabs an ornament off the side.
Rose begins to turn around in fear Jack hit her over the head uncontrollably. Rose then falls to the floor... Long shot as Jack quickly falls to his knees and drops the ornament at the side of Rose. Jack begins to shake her in a panic to try wake her but nothing happens.
Mid shot as Jack stands up slowly and stares are Rose with a worried look on his face.
Close up showing facial expression. Jack realises she is dead, face begins to look worried. Long shot as Jack quickly leaves.
Dialogue & Actions
Long shot of the living room Rose and Jack are in.
Mid shot as Rose sits down on the sofa.
Rose
Why do you have to ruin it for us, we move to a nice town with nice people and when we finally settle in you go and ruin it, every time!
Close up, side shot as Jack puts his head in his hands. Speaks in a muffled voice.
Jack
Jack
I'm sorry
Mid shot, side shot as Rose stands up and points her hands towards Jack and raises her voice.
Rose
Is that all you can say "you're sorry" because it isn't good enough you've killed three people now and you make me put up with it, well I don't think I can anymore!
Long shot with slight panning as Jack stands up and slowly walks towards Rose, moving her hands out of the way.
Jack
Don't leave me, I don't know what I'll do... You know what I'm capable of and being alone will make everything worse.
Mid shot side shot as Rose pulls away from Jack and looks down in disappointment
Rose
Well you told me you'd leave it, how can I even trust what you say anymore. We're constantly worried and running away from the trouble you've caused for us.
Side close up as Jack holds Rose's face and raises it up
Jack
Look at me, nobody will find out I promise, it'll just be another missing persons report nobody will link him to us... I promise.
Long shot as Rose stares into Jack's eyes, moves Jacks hand away from her face and begins to walk away.
Rose
You can't make promises like that. There could be a fibre of anything on his body they are professionals!
Jack
Well they didn't find out about the other two so what's to say they'll find out about the third.
Mid shot as Rose turns back to face Jack furiously and waves her hands around in his face.
Rose
You talk about it as if you're proud of what you've done... I am disgusted in you! When we first started dating 4 years ago I was 15 and I never thought you'd be a cold hearted murderer!
Mid shot to close up as Jack pushes Rose's hands down out of his face and begins to wave his in her face.
Jack
Don't call me that, that is not who I am! You didn't have to talk to him, if you would of just stayed away from him this never would've happened.
Long shot as Rose angrily walks towards Jack, and pushes him back.
Rose
You always do this, you can't blame your cold hearted murders on me... I can't talk to guys but you can talk to girls, it works different for you!
Long shot as Jack pushes Rose back.
Jack
I am not cold hearted or a murderer!
Mid shot as Rose shouts at Jack as his head begins to look towards the floor.
Rose
You've killed three people Jack! When are you going to get that into your stupid head.
Close up as Jack moves his head slightly up and looks negatively at Rose.
Jack
Don't call me that, you're meant to love me!
Close up as Rose stares Jack in the eye.
Rose
How can I love a murderer.
Close up as Jack looks Rose in the eye.
Jack
Stop.
Rose
Else what
Mid shot as Jack slowly took a slight step away from Rose.
Jack
Stop playing on my fuse I don't want to hurt you again Rose please!
Long shot as Rose takes one last look at Jack and angrily begins to walk away.
Rose
You should never of hurt me in the first place, you've ruined it for us. I am leaving you Jack, you can go down alone.
Long shot with the camera following Jack. Jack runs towards Rose and grabs an ornament off the side.
Jack
No Rose! You're going nowhere
Rose begins to turn around in fear Jack hit her over the head uncontrollably. Rose then falls to the floor... Long shot as Jack quickly falls to his knees and drops the ornament at the side of Rose. Jack begins to shake her in a panic to try wake her but nothing happens.
Rose! Rose! Speak to me, please Rose! Wake up!
Mid shot as Jack stands up slowly and stares are Rose with a worried look on his face.
What have I done... I'm sorry.
Close up showing facial expression. Jack realises she is dead, face begins to look worried. Long shot as Jack quickly leaves.
Close up showing facial expression. Jack realises she is dead, face begins to look worried. Long shot as Jack quickly leaves.
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